Hebrew Bible Half of DMin Project

Miriam, oil painting on canvas by Anselm Feuerbach, 1862, in Alte Nationalgalerie collection, https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Feuerbach_Mirjam_2.jpg.

This term at the Berkeley School of Theology, I have focused on developing the Hebrew Bible section of my Doctor of Ministry (DMin) project. My project is to revise the Transforming Literature of the Bible (TLB) material I have used in Santa Clara County jail classes since 2018. TLB was originally created by the Rev. Canon William Barnwell. Read the complete project proposal here. I have been rewriting the 2018 material to support inmates in three particularly-underserved and vulnerable groups: those whose primary language is Spanish, and/or have mental health challenges, and/or have reading comprehension difficulties. Making materials more accessible may help to encourage their faith walk, sustain their difficult journey, and discourage recidivism after release. To make the written material more engaging, I added public domain images, some of which are featured here. I turned in a mature draft of the 127 pages completed so far to my DMin committee last week. (I edited down the 2018 TLB which had 256 pages on the Hebrew Bible.) While I am waiting for committee comments, I am starting work on the Christian Testament section.

The Hebrew Bible section includes information about the class setting and very positive student feedback from the first two surveys. An except about that:

“The first class to use the updated Transforming Literature of the Bible – Book One, Hebrew Bible materials started in August 2023 with sixteen potential students and ended with five who were graduated on 6 December 2023. All students were male inmates in a minimum-security protective custody dorm of Santa Clara County Jail, in California. Jail students leaving class because of release or transfer to prison, or another facility are normal patterns. Population churn is part of what makes jail-based education and faith-based pastoral care challenging. The Prison Policy Initiative wrote in their annual analysis ‘Mass Incarceration: the Whole Pie 2023.’” 

“Prisons are facilities under state or federal control where people who have been convicted (usually of felonies) go to serve their sentences. Jails are city- or county-run facilities where a majority of people locked up are there awaiting trial (in other words, still legally innocent), many because they can’t afford to post bail… In 2021, about 421,000 people entered prison gates, but people went to jail almost 7 million times… At least 1 in 4 people who go to jail will be arrested again within the same year — often those dealing with poverty, mental illness, and substance use disorders, whose problems only worsen with incarceration.”[1]

“Each week, Katy Dickinson wrote the TLB chapter for the following week and distributed it in paper form to the class. Homework was to read the next week’s Bible and TLB reading assignments. Class feedback and responses were used to update TLB material as the class progressed. TLB homework often included literary selections to complement and extend topics raised in the scripture reading.”

“The TLB was available in both English and Spanish. The Spanish was an uncorrected machine translation in Microsoft Word of the English version. Four students read both Spanish and English versions and one read only in English. Class discussions and reading aloud alternated between English and Spanish (and sometimes Spanglish). An example of the benefits of a class presented in two languages was a discussion we had about how the English word righteous translated into Spanish as justicia. The common translation of justicia is the English word justice. The class had several discussions of what it meant that righteousness could be equated with justice.” 


[1] Wendy Sawyer and Peter Wagner, “Mass Incarceration: the Whole Pie 2023,” Prison Policy Initiative, 14 March 2023, https://www.prisonpolicy.org/reports/pie2023.html

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Christmas Cards to Prisoners

Supporters of the Stepping Stones Gathering got together yesterday to write Christmas Cards for prisoners. Stepping Stones was started in 2018 to support jail and prison inmates, and those in reentry and recovery. Sending written holiday greetings and letters of support to prisoners has been part of this ministry since it started. Prisoners have told us each year how important it is to get cards. Since many inmates are not in communication with outside friends and family, our cards may be the only ones arriving. Some prisoners keep their cards and re-read the encouraging messages for weeks or months.

Cards are donated and must meet jail and prison requirements: no foil or glitter, regular postal size, no scents or images on envelopes. (Also, no “Home for the Holidays” messages – because most of the prisoners will not be home.) St. Andrew’s Episcopal Church hosted the card writing (we met in one of the rooms of St. Andrew’s School), provided coffee and tea, and is buying the stamps. Stepping Stones volunteers donated sweets or sandwiches to the party.

I put together a list of 122 inmates and people in reentry with whom Stepping Stones has been in contact, verifying prisoner addresses against Santa Clara County and California location websites. We regretfully do not have addresses 32 of those who have been released or sent to another carceral facility but we hope to locate them for next year.

Yesterday, diligent Stepping Stones card writers completed 263 cards. Each of the 90 men and women for whom we have an address will be sent at least one card, and many will get more than one. I am mailing 65 at a time so as not to overwhelm the jail mail distribution system. Cards with glitter or gold foil or decorated envelopes have been donated to a San Jose program that supports people in reentry and recovery.

Stepping Stones meets online Sundays at 8 am Pacific time to worship and support each other. Please consider joining us: weekly information is on the Stepping Stones Facebook page. Some of the Stepping Stones members are also chaplains for the Correctional Institutions Chaplaincy of Santa Clara County, regularly visiting prisoners in jail.

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TechWomen Team Palestine Pitch Win

TechWomen Team Palestine, Seed Grant and Pitch Presentation win, 20 October 2023
TechWomen Team Palestine, Seed Grant and Pitch win, 16 October 2023

As a TechWomen Professional Mentor and country Impact Coach for many years, I have been honored and impressed with TechWomen’s Team Palestine 2023. Each year, every one of the 100+ women in 22 country teams invited by the U.S. Department of State – Bureau of Educational and Cultural Affairs from the Middle East, Africa, and Central Asia works hard to create a project that will improve their home when they return from working and learning in America. Team Palestine has worked especially hard under the horrific circumstances of their homeland being at war, starting two weeks into their six week program. Their compassion, dedication, and intelligent leadership has inspired the entire TechWomen community. Working with my sister mentors, we coached the team in developing a project to support STEM education among primary school students in Palestine. On 16 October in San Francisco, they gave their three minute pitch, and on 20 October, Team Palestine was one of five teams that won an award and seed funding! I am so proud that Team Palestine will help children at home learn science, technology, engineering, and math as part of recovering from the trauma of war.


Linked here are the Project Aspiration presentation slides from Pitch Day, and TechWomen Team Palestine’s Executive Summary. Please follow us on Facebook!

TechWomen Team Palestine pitch win, 16 Oct 2023
TechWomen Team Palestine pitch win, 16 Oct 2023

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Clausen House Art Show

Clausen House is a registered charitable institution that provides housing, wellness programs, and advocacy for developmentally disabled adults in Oakland and the surrounding San Francisco East Bay area. As a member of the Board of Directors, I am supporting Clausen House staff working on the annual Art Show, including holding several art creation sessions with clients. I brought in art history books for clients to look through. It was interesting to see two create portraits of Nefertiti, and another be inspired by the Paleolithic era Venus of Lespugue. Please plan to attend the Art Show on 20 October 2023 to view and purchase these and other delightful creations.

Thanks to the Mountain View Odd Fellows Lodge for donating some of the frames!

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Kitchen Remodeled

Our kitchen remodel today reached the “done enough” stage. I like our updated kitchen and want to start using it. I am glad to see the newly-uncovered oak floors go well with the fresh paint and granite counter and backspash. Lots of little stuff still to do (fixing many paint errors-and-omissions, installing under-cabinet lights, replacing shelves, replacing a sliced window screen, replacing the cabinet muntins…). All the little blue bits of tape in the pictures are where the paint is messed up. However, at this point, we would rather finish that work ourselves. We ran all of the plumbing and appliances last night and found two leaks, but those were fixed today. Some of the work was very well done, especially the cabinet upgrades, and the stone work. I love how the granite pattern behind the stove looks like sand dunes, and how the book matched granite patterns flow into each other. I also like having shelves under the windows. Still, I am happy to have the contractors out of the house. I am also happy to be able to use my new super-fancy laundry folding counter. I figure I spend so much time standing there, I should enjoy how it looks. Our house is almost 100 years old and I expect this kitchen to serve it well into its next century.

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Singing in Jail

Song books, Sep 2023
Song books, Sep 2023

Part of my Doctor of Ministry dissertation project at the Berkeley School of Theology is to find better ways to engage jail inmates in our studies together. I have been leading theology and Bible study classes in Santa Clara County jail since 2015, working with the Correctional Institutions Chaplaincy (CIC). The version of the class I developed with Canon William Barnwell in 2018 is called Transforming Literature of the Bible (TLB). My DMin project is the first major revision of TLB since 2018.

For the weekly opening worship in our class, My Co-Mentor (and husband) John Plocher and I have been using the worship bulletins from our home parish, St. Andrew’s Episcopal Church. However, that music has proven challenging. Many inmates love and long for music and as a CIC Chaplain, I am privileged to bring in my smart phone and a speaker. But, while the lyrics and music are in St. Andrew’s worship bulletin, few inmates read music and finding recorded music that matches has been a challenge.

Last Wednesday, John had an idea so we tried something new. I wrote the repetitive lyrics for a traditional hymn on the white board and played the music so the inmates could sing along. They loved it and asked to sing all five verses through a second time before class ended! Most of the students are Christian but the seminar also includes a man who identifies as a Messianic Jew. About two thirds of the inmates in this class are Latino and speak Spanish (most also speak English). All are welcome.

Here is the start of the lyrics we sang, from Hymnary:

As I went down to the river to pray,
studyin’ about that good old way,
and who shall wear the starry crown,
good Lord, show me the way.

Oh, sisters, let’s go down, 
let’s go down, come on down.
Oh, sisters, let’s go down,
down to the river to pray. [Refrain]

In class, we listened to the lovely recording by Alison Krauss, from the “O Brother, Where Art Thou?” album. Our daughter Jessica Dickinson Goodman not only has a lovely big voice but also a Minor in Vocal Music from Carnegie Mellon University. On Thursday, she and I talked about the challenge of bringing singable music into jail. Last night, Jessica brought over a selection of her song books so now I have more resources.

I am week-by-week revising the assigned TLB chapters, include new material and illustrations, and providing a Spanish translation. I plan to use Hymnary and the books Jessica provided to also create a supplementary TLB section of lyrics that are aligned with the themes of each chapter. So far, the inmates have been very engaged with the new materials. I just had two more students who had completed a prior TLB seminar ask if they can rejoin. So far, so good!

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Welcoming TechWomen Team Palestine

Shagufta Ahmed, Nancy Hendrickson, Katy Dickinson - TechWomen Team Palestine Impact Coaches, 11 Sep 2023
Shagufta Ahmed, Nancy Hendrickson, Katy Dickinson – TechWomen Team Palestine Impact Coaches

Yesterday, my sister TechWomen Impact Coaches for 2023 Team Palestine and I had a lovely conversation starting to plan for the arrival of our new mentees. Looking forward to learning from Shagufta Ahmed and Nancy Hendrickson! The 104 TechWomen mentees from 21 countries arrive in San Francisco soon and we are very excited to meet them.

I am thinking of my dear friends and colleagues among the Palestine TechWomen Fellows of cohorts-past, and asking them to support the incoming team. I am also thinking of my journeys in Palestine and hoping that I will learn as much during the next six weeks. My first trip to Palestine was in 1979 after I was graduated from U.C. Berkeley, my second was in 2006 to create a Sun Microsystems mentoring program between technical groups in St. Petersburg (Russia) and Hertzliya (Israel), and the third was an (unofficial) delegation of five TechWomen mentors to Gaza City in 2016, as guests of Mercy Corps and Gaza Sky Geeks. I very much look forward to traveling there again.

I was honored to be the 2010-2011 Process Architect for the U.S. State Department – Bureau of Educational and Cultural Affairs’ TechWomen mentoring program and am very proud to continue my service as a citizen diplomat. In 2022, U.S. Secretary of State Anthony Blinken expanded TechWomen (based in the San Francisco Bay Area 2010-2022) to include a cohort in Chicago. My daughter, Jessica Dickinson Goodman, is a mentor for 2023’s Team Nigeria, based in Chicago. Jessica was one of the mentors who went with me to Palestine in 2016 and she has been an Impact Coach for Team Palestine in prior TechWomen years.

About TechWomen: “TechWomen empowers, connects and supports the next generation of women leaders in science, technology, engineering and mathematics (STEM) from Africa, Central and South Asia, and the Middle East by providing them the access and opportunity needed to advance their careers, pursue their dreams, and inspire women and girls in their communities. Through mentorship and exchange, TechWomen strengthens participants’ professional capacity, increases mutual understanding between key networks of professionals, and expands girls’ interest in STEM careers by exposing them to female role models.” There are 1,153 TechWomen Emerging Leaders and Fellows in 22 Countries. More than 150 companies have hosted TechWomen Emerging Leaders.

2006 John Dead Sea Israel
Katy standing in the Dead Sea 2006

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